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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person chatty
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! thats brilliant. im on my way to read it. :D
person k
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it.
person Ms_Figg
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ALL READERS: You can read the next chapters at
http://www.theburningpen.com
until AFF gets the database up and I can transfer them here. There is a very sorry review link too. Thanks.
person droxy
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love jealous Severus and Hermione has learned a few things about men...
person Experience My Dreams
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great few chapters!! I love how Peter thinks he is going to fuck her!! I love it!! Wonderful as always!!
person larissa
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you solved alot of my reservations...excellent job as usual!
person Pam
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Hermione's so clever, I love it. Please post again soon. Thanks
person JJ
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've only gotten as far as chapter 22, but boy was that a HOT - 2 chapter!!!! - 'deflowering!!!! I wish I could continue reading, but I know that the next time I do, I'll have some more exciting, delicious story to return to!!!!! Too bad I've got to sleep and work!!!!! The kids can take care of themselves!
person JTBJAB
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ewww, ewww, ewww, ewww! Pettigrew... *shudder* Even the thought of him kissing me anywhere is disgusting! What a sacrifice Hermione is making, lol!
person Pastel
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It's great. UPdate soon please.