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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person alitheia7
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2 more chapters! Your updates are so fast! Wonderful!
Love the possesive potion's master. And Ginny is becoming
quite an intriguing character. Would love to read more about
her also.
person Pam
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, I hope Hermione brings a couple of boys around just to drive him batty...LOL I love it when Hermione has an attitude that Sev seems to think needs adjusting. So far I love the way the story's going. Please post again soon. Thanks.
person Marsha
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just had to do it, an MLC, my favorite kind of HG/SS fic. I'm going to get fired if I keep reading you at work, but I'm addicted to your stories. Great start, can't wait to see what happens next! (Hermione with Ron and Harry? What a train wreck that'd be.)
person Pam
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great post, love Ginny. Please post again soon. Thanks.
person Edania
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i have to say this is the frist story i can say I am INLOVE WITH! very cool miss _figg. Oh i would love her to bring some men oh maybe her old date , Victor Krum or something ( never good with names ) Could come and visit her? what will snape i wonder if he saw this? They are allow to see other people, it would be fair. To tell ya never thought he would have a sex life to tell ya, thats new to me.
person angel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm please please more i would like to read more .. please update soon ...later for now

angel
person hermioneandseverusfan82
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dear ms_figg am sorry to say this but right am not a fan this story but that does not mean when it is done and i go back and read that i might become a fan. the reson when you state that severus has lot of lovers just rub me the wrong way. i know it is only a story reading a story where a man lots lovers is just creepy in openion. i still think you are a good writer i just don't this story at the present time.
person JW
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - hmm, Hermione can invite 4 guests to the wedding, so I'm guessing Ginny, Ron, and Harry, but don't know who her fourth would be. And won't Voldemort get wind of Hermione running around with other boys? (All those Slytherin kiddies telling their Death Eater daddies....) I wonder if Hermione and Severus will watch each other's "dates".... hmmm.... Thanks for updating, Ms_Figg!
person aeltiera
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg you are very brave indeed in tackling the Marriage Law Challenge...I've read some truly horrible ones along with some really good ones...but knowing your fun writing style, I am sure you will make it work! Love your stories...can't wait to see Chapter 2.
person luna luck
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! Hwven't read a marrige law one like this before. Keep up the great work and as always I will be waiting for the next update!!!!