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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person chatty
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry about that short review. i just finished reading ch1. OMG thats going to be so funny. I can already sense it. I hope severus gets pissed off to hell and we end up with big big lemons. *grin*

i CANT wait for your next chapters... update faaaaaaaaaaaaaaast Ms_Figg.
person RandomChickWhosUsuallyAnon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can you have HG f... ermm... spend quality time with LM? That'd really piss off Sevvikins. ;-) Please? I'm not asking for HGLM-love, just sex... Even a BJ will do... PLEASE?!?

person Miepje
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* (not very dignified I know)

Ms_Figg takes a shot at MLC!! lol This should be good ^^
Can't wait to see how this will go...
person JW
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4-5 - uh-oh, all those boys wanting to shag/snog "Mrs. Snape" - but not because she's Hermione. I hope she sees that. Perhaps he should inspect her wardrobe and keep her wedding dress and sexier stuff in his wardrobe, just for appearance, of course (heh!). So, he'll have Death Eater visitors? Interesting.... I wonder what those conversations will be like. And now she's told everyone they have an "open marriage" - news that will get back to Voldemort somehow. VERY interesting!! Write, Figgy, write!!!
person angel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm maybe hi should talk to his new wife and find out the truth ...then he will know for sure what did that night .... please please please update soon i would love to read what is going to happen next

angel
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hermioneandseverusfan: Honey, listen. Implied means just that. Suggestive. Not blatant. Let your mind take it where you want. But I am going to be honest here, you piss me off and I'll put Severus in the middle of an orgy just for you. :::eg::: lol just kidding. maybe. But seriously, if the story upsets you that much, please don't read it. I'm not going to change it because you don't like where its going. It's nothing personal. It's just my story. ok?
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was great! I loved your wedding scene! It rocked! I can't wait to read more!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm always impressed by the sheer volume of what you write - you've always got something on the boil! I'm glad you decided to tackle the wedding law challenge... can't wait to see what happens next :D
person Edania
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh damn snape you bastard ! lol I love herm's dad, reminds of mine, ( not in build but the way he acts) . I found myself laughing hard at that part. I wonder if snape does make herm mad.. what would happen and who will win!
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmm possessive snape....yummy. i'm sure you'll make this marriage-law fic QUITE interesting;)