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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Denise
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 2-4: GOD!! Life is soooo busy. waiting for an update on you story is one of the few things that is keping me going! i like the story so far. It ia amazing to see what my favorite author does with my favorite plot-line. so far...i like it. it is actually very diff from the rest. in the other ones....snape and hermione get married.....they have sex on their wedding night....they both love it....and then they hav emore sex...and fall in love...im glad uve changed up the plot a bit. well cant wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
person alitheia7
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start can't wait to read more! There's
quire a bit of leeway with this one since it's not
mandatory to shag right after the wedding so you
can build their relationship slowly.
person ccrawley
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's great that Hermione is realizing her options and not limiting herself to her sexy husband. But should she really rule out other deatheaters such as Malfoy?
person Obsidian_Hair
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurra, another story!! No, sofare noone has taken this approach to the challenge!! With what kind of Snape are we dealing here with? Some what nice? Rather nice? Nice? Reasonable? Ah well, we'll see...

I'm happy that you're writting another story. Very happy =)
person kris
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait for more! You haven't disappointed me yet!
person Droxy
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I smell trouble with a capital S or SS.

It is going to be interesting to see if this is just about sex or will you have them fall in love?

person ccrawley
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
With all the varying story dealing with MLC, yours is a nice change with the marriage starting out being open. Oh, poor Snape not getting it up until he was by himself. Hermione is such a heartbreaker.
person k
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor dumb dependable, love having ginny in the stories, can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what is it with you having severus such a male whore thats sick i hate hermione and severus story where his has a detail sex scenes with other women beside hermione
person chatty
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. im the first to review. nice story. i love this marriage law stuff. keep it up ms_figg