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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Look out for blondie, Hermione! I wonder how hard Lu will push to make Sev share????? I saw all the fighting on here earlier, is that crazy or what? You might have to start putting the disclaimer "This Is Why It Is Called FICTION" on your stuff. :D Believe me, though - if you wrote a story about Severus Snape pining after a gorilla I'd still read it...but please don't.....
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just when everything's "copasetic"...(to borrow a term from a previous boyfriend who thought I was a little too randy for his needs)...
...You see fit to turn Severus into a crazed husband.....jealous with lust!!!
I'm down with that...as long as he respects Hermione. Tis a huge order to fill...given his past experience and reaction to women. So far, he's an ugly, old brute.
Ms. Figg... You've got your work cut out for you here!!
...You see fit to turn Severus into a crazed husband.....jealous with lust!!!
I'm down with that...as long as he respects Hermione. Tis a huge order to fill...given his past experience and reaction to women. So far, he's an ugly, old brute.
Ms. Figg... You've got your work cut out for you here!!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. It's great.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMMM Lucius! I know he is a "bad" guy but come on he could be sooo yummy in the hands of a good writer. Hint Hint ;)
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yummy goodness, can't wait for some smutty goodness.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Snape is quite intense, he seems to need a lot of controle to keep himself in check. The more controle needed, the more lies underneath just waiting to come out... right?!
Hermione is great! I love her new look etc. in this story.
Hmmm, seems like Snape has some plans for Hermione... what if he finds out about her lack of experience? Will he find out too late? Well, don't make us wait too long and update soon please?!
Hermione is great! I love her new look etc. in this story.
Hmmm, seems like Snape has some plans for Hermione... what if he finds out about her lack of experience? Will he find out too late? Well, don't make us wait too long and update soon please?!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm not good, a jealous Snape and an innocent Hermione playing dangerous games. Is there something in t he binding or just Snape being possesive?
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, such a twist. I love your Ginny.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter, it points nicely to things to come. Just a friendly hint for future reference, a girl can legally consent to sex at 16 here in the UK, and Hermione would also be a consenting Adult at 17 in the Wiozarding world. 18 is the general age of majority, so she wouldn't be able to marry in the Muggle world without her parent's consent, even if she'd been shagging a man legally for a couple of years by then. Then again, your stories are so wonderfully AU anyway :)
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A lovely story with an intersting plot!!! I hope that hermione will date a great many boys, before snape thinks about claiming her for himself. If she is interested, she should make him wait and try to remind him of the fact, that this marriage is only in name. If hermione gives in to fast, snape will take possession of her only for the sake of having her and not letting someone else getting his plaything. He has to stew, to realize, that he has to give hermione something in return, to get her.