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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Very very good. Can't wait till the next chapter!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Delightful as always, Ms Figg!!! I luv the tension between these two characters. It always leads to some really hot luvin'! Update soon, por favor!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K
person casey
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great fic. but then again if it says author: Ms_Figg its sure to be very entertaining! good job.
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
jana: I already addressed the name Erin. It is also used as a male name. In the reviews above you will see a website address where it is listed under popular male names, spelled exactly as Erin. Thanks.
person lao80
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I think Mione and Ginny should have a b-day sleep over and Sev can get all sorts of the wrong ideas about the two by listening in.
person alitheia7
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great so far even if Severus is a bit violent.
person Dee
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great so far............Always enjoy your stories
person Jana
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah it's right up there with Laverne and Ariel. It's still very distracting from the story.
person Snapesum
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VERY good so far! Cant wait to read more. I been so busy I came check here and theres 2 new stories ! :D ...F*CKING funny chapter 6 where Severus is misunderstanding Hermiones words...Im actually giggling..I hate giggling. What are you doing to me!!!

Im still laughing -_-' argh.
Wonderful as usual.
I like the idea of your Severus not being too thin! I imagine him with a little bulk and this is gooood. Nd I like the idea of Severus unnerving Hermione by walking around in boxers hehe. Itd be interesting how each other act if a DE buddy drops by OoOO >: )
Carley (Snapesum)
person sweetdreams123@hotmail.com
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not the way i imagined severus would be when he found out he'd been lied to. i thought he'd first sit there with his mouth open, then start yelling! i didn't think he'd tell her his intentions though. maybe just offer to show her the different forms of petting. i like severus jealous!