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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Remetan
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wowsa, Severus certainly is prone to mood swings and possessiveness in your tale. I hope he figures out how to control it (or perhaps redirect it?) before he gets into anything with Hermione!
person K
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yummy, i wonder if ginny will hook up with lucius in the future?
person paula
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see how seviee poo handles our girl now,can you update quicker than you do?
person Pam
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great posts, doesn't like malfoy much..LOL..Please post again soon. Thanks.
person JW
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - go, Severus!! Can't wait to see what he does to keep boys away from her. Hey, is Raucous in this fic? He can always eat some of the skinnier boys..... heh-heh!
person chatty
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good as usual. Lucius was a pleasant surprise but what an evil bastard he is! Atleast now hermione has noticed snape's eyes. lol next chapter please. :)
person droxy
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, she doesnt have a chance in hell does she ;>
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Charmy: You'd think writing a challenge would save on the plot thinking, wouldn't you? So did I...still a plot within a plot. lol
person Moyra
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He does really have his date on his wedding day - that
person Moyra
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chap 5:
Oh he