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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person alitheia7
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chs 9-10 I love how Severus expalined himself after her confession to him.
He may be initially claiming to just want to fuck her, but after spending more
quality time with his curvaceous wife I suspect he will change his mind. He is
really methodical though, weeding out the competition. Now with the threat of
Lucius he has a chance to save the damsel. Love it!
person chatty
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That voldemort is a stupid jerk specially his dodging etc when those two were fighting and now he is beating severus almost to death. And the marriage law is no more? i hope they remain together tho. Sev is really going through so much for her. :)
person siriusluv
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh so evil!
person SpellWeaver
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just spent a few hours reading your stories. You are my hero! All of your stuff is fantastic! Keep up the tres bien, bueno, good work. I look forward to more.
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! WHERE"S SEVERUS! I HOPE HE SHOWS UP TO STOP LUCIUS! UPDATE AND SOON! I HVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Hypatia
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"She must not be shagging him right." LOL!!
person ccrawley
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, our girl cannot be that weak and such. Malfoy deserves to get his from her. Liked the chapter--so looking forward to the next chapter.
person angel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah lucius is dead and severus is alive ..... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Miepje
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Snape's gone berserk. *phew* How will this go?? Update soon, please!
person Ladytalon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is a piece of work, isn't he? What a bastard...let's hope Severus can get his revenge on him.