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Ch 10 - ACK!!!! Get back to your keyboard right now and post the next chapter!!!!! Drat, where is that Severus.... Erin was too easy for him to scare off (and our boy Severus scared him off very well), but LUCIUS..... eeps!!

Oh, tha agony! What a nasty thing to do to me. How long will I have to wait to see what happens?
I am glad that severus is going to avenge hermione, and surprised that Voldemort would take up the cause. But I guess thats only because he sees an advantage to having the witch alive and on their side.
Well, we'll see. I hope he gets lucius good. I still want to know how ginny came to be the one to knock on the door, was it imperio?

Another cliff. DAMN! Are you being paid to throw cliffs all over the place, to effectively infuriate your poor and so, so ,so loyal readers?
I wanna know how Severus is and i wanna know NOW! *cries of exasperation*. sniff!

Oh, no! I wonder if Severus will get to Hermione in time. Update soon please.

Arg! I go to bed, wake up, do some housework and come back, and then I am all excited because there are four new chapters. Four! But then, oh, then...I read through the end of chapter 13 and it is the most evil cliffhanger yet! Dang it all! Please bring some more for me, oh how I love your stories!!!

I really love all your stories, but this one is really nerve whacking.

Marriage Law repealed?
Nooooo!
Well, I suppose they can just marry again?

Ch 10-11 Poor Erin encountered Snape in his evil stalking mode...it's not wise to covet Professor Snape's belongings!

As much as I hate to think it, I think you've probably represented Lucius in his true character. The man makes my heart lurch but as you wrote, I think he would be a real bastard. Hermione was lucky to get away from him.

Severus was not thinking clearly. He may be in Deatheater mode but he has let emotion overrule his common sense which may make things very difficult for him with Voldemort. He'll have to calm down and get his occlumency in place or the Dark Lord will make mincemeat out of him.

This story has taken an interesting lean. I like it. BTW, Sheena was great. LOL he deserved every scratch.

I think I've read every MLC out there, (hmmm, may have missed one or two on FF.net), and I've never seen a Voldemort sanctioned duel between Lucius and Severus. While the attack on Hermione and a fight between Sev and Luc are are part of the challenge, your take on this is original, fun and hot. Then again, everything you write has those three elements!

I'm literally hooked on your fan fics. It's kinda scary.

Oh no! Severus wins, but gets punished... Well this cliffie is no bettter ^^

You keep me with my nose close to the screen Ms_Figg!