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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry your writing was so well done I forgot to review for the past five chapters. ;-;

So I'll try to review some more. I like violent Sevvy. Beats the "sentimental git" version. Or the OOC one [where he's incredibly stupid and is unable to figure some things out].
=)
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Just want to let you all know this story IS finished. You can read it in entirety at http://www.theburningpen.com

I created this site...well started using it when AFF went down. There are quite a few new stories on it as well. Just wanted to let you know. Thanks. ~ Ruth
person nel
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy this story and am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep on writing.
person Vivian
schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice :) I love the direction you are taking with this story. What about having Hermione and Severus move to some other places (i.e. shower, kitchen table, his lab, etc)? I wait in anticipation for your next chapter.

~Vivian
person Rhia
schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please continue!
person rini
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing, absoultly perfect. When are you going to make a new chappy? hope soon... damn it, now what am i going to do tomarrow? lol. have a happy v-tines day!
person rini
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
p.s
No tiffany, I'M HER BIGGEST FAN!
person sally
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Severus is sooo dark. This is the scariest I've ever seen him! How can he be such a monster and yet be so tender with Hermione-- you've managed to realistically convey his subtle complexities. Love those lemons in between. I'm on tenterhooks worried about her and Severus, too. What if she gets pregnant now? A horrible thought crossed my mind-- will Severus ever be caught and punished for those three murders? Those were such awful crimes, yet I'd hate to see Severus get caught and convicted! Can't wait for this to continue!
person Redlightspin
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it "keep it up"
person LaLa
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Another brilliant story. Sexy to the core. Thanks to you and your immagination, one thought of Severus Snape has me panting. Anyway, update soon. It's not like you to stop all of a sudden.

Can't wait for more!!!