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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Erica
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope Lucius gets his butt kicked.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on Mrs. Figg, give us MORE! Don't do cliff hangers, you're soooo cruel.... Goood but cruellllL!!!!
person Maela
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm....now that the marriage law has been repealed what will Severus and Hermione do with their feelings for one another? Can't wait for the next update. :)
person chatty
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, everything's coming back to normal now and Snape's healing very faast. :) only lemons ahead. hehe.
person Joi
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh heck NO you better not leave it like that for a long period of time! Ha ha, your story is AWESOME. Obviously so if I'm reviewing a mere minute or two after you've posted chapter ten. Well, it only felt like a few minutes to me. PLEASE don't leave me hanging. I'm so bored tonight, your story is keeping me sane! You're an awesome author!

Joi
person Miepje
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arghhh! What an evil cliffie!
Great chapter tho. Snape is seeing red; I hope he can concentrate enough to win...

Luckily you update very often (thank you for this ^^), so we don't have to wait days or weeks for the next chapter...*phew*
person k
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooh sevvie will take him apart when he finds out, hopefully lucius doesn't rough her up too bad.
person QueenRuby
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I should listen to the voice in my head that worns to to look who the author is before I start reading. Now I find I'm sitting here wishing for the next update and thinking about cold showers. This is great. Though you said something in your authors note about this Severus being dark. I don't find him half as Dark as the one in 'Inside the blakest hart.' One of my favrits there.
person Alex
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliiiiiiif! *sigh* You ARE a cruel woman Ms_Figg you know that don't you?
Really nice story. I'm hooked. Off to the next chapter!
person hermioneandseverusfan82
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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