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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person k
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more.
person pokerfan
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh Ms. Figg ---another awesome story. Couldn't let it pass without reviewing.....Please send some lemons my way before bedtome....PRETTY PLEASE!!!
person pokerfan
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bedtime I mean...it is way past mine....
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marsha: wow. I have to confess something. I didn't actually read the original challenge. I figured there were probably several, so I just focused on the forced marriage issue. Hermione being attacked, and Severus and Lucius fighting were just the way the story evolved. wow. I guess though, those would be the most interesting elements. I must have synched into them somehow. lol. Writing can get really weird sometimes. Thanks for your review. It was enlightening. Posting next chapter now.
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anon: yes, the double standard bites...but it exists. Just remember its part of the story, not part of the author. lol.
person rachel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh i cant wait to see what happens! hope snape kicks his ass. way to go hermione on getting away from malfoy, i dont think ginny would want him now. i think how you are developing hermiones/severus relationship, making him realize shes more than a just a beautiful woman, but has other attributes. cant wait til the next update
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love all of your stories! please update soon! xx
person Lilo
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great! Ginny was so in her element! I like how you make Hermione "Mature" into her own with Gin's help! Severus is wonderful and I'm really enjoying your story! Please continue! Thank you!
person JW
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - yikes!! Scary! First off, Poppy better not be gossiping about her patient's virginity status unless it's to say NICE things about Severus marrying Hermione because of the law, etc. Second off, I hope Lucius gets killed off; one less Death Eater to help Voldy and all that. And Lucius better get booted from the Hogwarts Board! Eeks... please update soon!
person TheBloodyXXX
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a huge fan of your work and I'm glad you decided to do ML. I love the story so far! I can't wait for more!