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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Sevsmione
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's the Severus I love!.....I mean to read about, Ha! Ha!
person sheedy
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job!! Of course where you are concerned we never expect less. And we are never disappionted.
person Pastel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update please. This chapter is great.
person Pastel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope that Severus kicks Lucius ass real hard! Update soon please.
person FLBanshee
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My! Heal that man quick, he's got an appointment to keep. Update soon, I'm hooked!
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Snape wins right? I mean...He has to right? Come on Snapey!!! LOL. Great story! Keep up the good work!
person EVIL MJ
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well you certainly have me hooked. I am enjoying more than I anticipated. I appreciate your updating so frequently. I am looking forward to more...SOON...lol.
person Anguloce
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah Ms_Figg, that lusty lil heart of yours makes a lot of people (myself most definitely included) very happy.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really do love all your stories, but something in this one keeps bothering me. hermione decides to dress in better fitting clothes and to show more skin, which not only makes her more attractive to other ppl, but i think better about herself, and so instead of being a virgin, shes a slut. i dont really think its either or, just because a girl has sex doesnt make her promiscuis, if snape has just as many lovers or even more, thats ok, but not for hermione. i understand how that you have the male characters think like that, but it is a horrible double standard. i do like the plot of this story and am going to continue to check for updates, but the use of the word slut just irks me.
person JW
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12 - YIPES!!! Lucius must die and Severus must win - and Severus has to get home to Hermione. Does she know what he's doing for her??? (bites fingernails nervously.....) Write faster, Figgy!