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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Lola_Lola
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He's alive!! I'm so relieved!
person chatty
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooh... thats sooo good. update faaaaaaster ms_figg, i cant wait for the next chapter. This is an evil cliff.
person falconfamiliar
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooohooo you rubbed out another great chapter. I would love to see someone
person firewall
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15 - Now now, don't have him mend too quickly...gotta let the passion grow. She really needs to be ready for him...mindless in passion. *rubs hands together* I can't wait.
person chatty
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay. the story is taking a new turn now. Cant wait for the pursuit to go on.
person Denise
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 2-15: well, i really LOVE what you are doing with the story! i really do.....the MLC is my favorite plot line....and with ur writing expertise.....lets just say that even hormones aren't making me cranky!!! i especially like the last chp (15)..it is just soo sweet.....and explained a lot. I am glad that you are still moving it relativley slow....and haven't made severus admit to anyone....not even himself that he is in love. I am not sure how far you want to go with this story, but maybe after this...maybe u could write one where hermione is pregnant with severus's child. It would be intersting to see how he copes with hermione's hormone problems.....well just a thought. Please update soon!
person JW
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - I just hope she doesn't divorce Severus, not after all that. Yipes!! Is anyone waiting at the gates for Severus? Another chapter today, Figgy? (makes puppy eyes....)
person Ak
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories. Each new one turns out to be my favorite.
person Edania
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god oh my god oh my god, he better win this fight! GO GO!
person kris
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I have not been disappointed in any of your fics thus far, you have got a way with purple prose! I often find myself judging other fics by your yardstick! If ever you decide to give Ron the old Chuck Jones classic "Duck Amuck" treatment and transfigure him into something stupid, you have my blessing! Gads the little shit is irritating!