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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Phrynia
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great story your writing and creative abilities amaze me!
Please update soon
person heather
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is an amazing forced marriage story. Please update soon I cant wait to read more.
person chatty
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was soo touching. i hate to read crying scenes but yours was perfect. Well. the crying part was a step towards severus and lemons. lol. update soon ms_figg.
person Sakurashope7
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am REALLY loving this story.....*sigh* I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for Severus to "take" Hermione....;)
person Pam
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There, ole Sev know's how to get Hermione's moter running...LOL Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person alitheia7
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch-15 Well he is surely recovering fast! But Voldie's porn star?
You know, I think this is the first story that you have Voldemort
alive and well and in command of the potions master. I wonder
if Hermione and Severus will take time out after the lemons
to destroy the threat. And I didn't expect Lucius
to go so far. I thought Severus would have stopped him. That
chapter was not an easy read.
person Alexia
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG This story is so good I actually read the entire thing in a day please update soon I know you probably here that from everyone lol but seriously you rock I wanna read more soon and please don\'t end it to soon lol!
person JTBJAB
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... bless them! Poor Severus though! All those injuries, I just hope he can recover as quickly as he wishes to!
person Pam
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great post. I love how Hermione stood up for herself to her parents, it's not easy, but she told them like it was. Please post again soon. Thanks.
person Edania
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now i can say i want a man like snape, hell yeah but now it seems she will stay with him, from the sounds of it.* thinks about the lemons*