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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Hypatia
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the AU sexual history part. Those naughty, older women!! Can't trust them ! LOL! (Reaches for bottle of Geritol)
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bobbi: Thank you for pointing that out. Big error. Going to take some work to fix too. I'll finish, then find a way to fix it without losing too much. How about a wedding present? Yeah! Thanks again.
person BSialana04@hotmail.com
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, I'm glad she told them. And honestly, maybe I'm just a little too emotional, but I did tear up when Jonathan opened his arms (And also his mind) to his daughter and who she has become. That simple gesture does more than words can. Now... Let's see what happens NEXT for our little soon to be lovers!

Joi
person Laura
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I hope Severus can get some revenge on Voldemort. I wonder how far you're going to take this....will they get to the final battle? Will we see Voldy killed? I hope so! As much as I love your lemons- and I suspect these will be quite juicy- I'd really love to see Voldy go down hard at Severus' hand...or Severus and Harry's.
Whatever you do, I know I'll be satisfied. :-)

Thank you for being so prolific! If only JK were, too, lol! I want #7 NOW!

Laura
person snapeslave
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg...i love it...woohoo...great chapter..i love them snuggling at the end...i hope they miss the deadline for annuling the marriage...they cannot annul it...omg ...please next update...keep up the great work...
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bobbi: (and readers) Continuity error fixed. Sorry bout that :::looking sheepish:::
person JW
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16 - I'm glad she told her parents everything, and that she now realizes she wants to stay married. Just keep Cissa and Draco away from Severus, and maybe she can just ignore the annulment issue until it goes away. I hope she spoils Severus in his recovery - none of this gruel and soup stuff, he needs REAL food! Thanks for updating, Ms_Figg!
person Carolin
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want more, please!
person pokerfan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to fall asleep like that every night... LOL

great job as always Ms Figg
person Remetan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh...please oh please let Severus get better! And soon, because this last chapter woke me just like it did Hermione! I am so ready for more. I like Severus here, very very much...