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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Tracy
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! This story is amazing! I can't wait to read what happens when Snape is better!
person Lilo
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Great new addittions! I'm glad Malfoy got what he had comming! I'm in love w/your story please continue! Thank you! I expecially like the last sceen with Hermione and Snape in the cot together at the Infirmary! Sweet.
person kishkitten36
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As with all of your stories, I look forward to every single chapter and look for updates every single day....and still want MORE MORE MORE!

:)

I don't review often, but just wanted to let you know I'm one of those quiet lurking readers that love your stuff!

BTW, I know someone else mentioned the continuity error of Hermione's birthday, three months passing and then Hermione's birthday again and that you are aware of it. I was just wondering about time frame. It should be mid to late December now, huh? Maybe they'll cozy up over Christmas break while all her "well-meaning" friends get out of her face for awhile...

:)

More soon please!
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Caldonia: "'Hermione
person Denise
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww...i saw your story pop to teh top of the list....but unfortunatley it wasnt for a new chapter! PLEASE update soon!! im waiting here....refresing the page again and again to see if there is a new chapter.....my husband thinks im going mad!! Anyway, please update soon! Ill be checking....lol
person Ladytalon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let's hear it for Voldy's personal porn star! Go Sevvie, go Sevvie.......
person TT
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waiting for an update for ages,... it's been 4 days,.. ! :P
person droxy
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is so sweet and romantic. Hermione is going to have her hands full and other things full soon! Can't wait.

person Denise
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 17: Nice chapter! i like the granny nightgown! its really funny.....now severus seems all sweet at this part of the story though. i understand his 'sweetness' towards hermione when she first almost got raped....but i think that you should add a bit more snark to snape. But dont worry, the characters in most of your stories are still the most in-character i have ever read...u seem to have a talent for that! well, i cant wait to see what happens next!
person Shdwcat27
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Figg, once again, awesome stories. Thank you for sharing your talent.