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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person lilith
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your new story! Sorry I haven't reviewed before, I have not much time to read at the moment. Do we get some action between them in the next chapter? Pomfrey is a terrible gossip, by the way. My nightmare of a doctor.
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! I can't wait to read more! update again and soon! And where are those lemon pies?! I need some now! lol Just Joking!

Your Biggest Fan,
Tiffany
person Kris
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for the next chapter!
person lilith
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oops, I just realized reading your reviews there is a second lilith around here! Well, you can recognice me, because I never capitalize my name. Update soon!
person snapegirl88
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fantastic
it was a great chapter
more please
i cant wait to see what happens next
person droxy
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes, it is time to let go of the child and embrace the person she is growing into.
person ccrawley
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a build up of things to come. Liked the pointing out of the different intrusions.
person Lilith.
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You will update. Now. Do it.

C'mon, please? *Sighs*

I love how un-cliched this is. Very refreshing.

Although, since I nit-pick, this has been eating me alive: "Erin" is a girl's name. "Aaron" is a boys name. But hey, you might already know that. Those crazy wizards and their silly names. It just kept biting my ass every time I read about him.
person Lilith.
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And I only just now skimmed the comments and noticed that you addressed that already. So I'm sorry (and I feel kind of silly, heh), you DO know.

Anyway. I looooove this story.
person a_reader
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how many times I can press Control-R in one minute?