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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person QueenRuby
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Showers Get your cold Showers! Limted time offer folks. Cold showers!" Hands out perpackaged cold showers to those who need it.
person Laura
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**Fanning self** Whew...lucky Hermione. Not for the first time, I wish I had a Snape. :p

Lovely! I really liked the things he can make with their emissions- cool. Methinks that tracking one will come in handy in the future...

More!
Laura
person Pam
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great posting, I love this story. Please post again soon. Thanks.
person JTBJAB
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe.... Hermione... impatient... again! Lol! She just has to have everything, now now now! Lol! Brill chapter!
person JTBJAB
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! We have to wait!? *Groan* Bring on the lemons! (Pretty please!)
person aurora
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY, smoochies (and more)!!!!!! Keep up the great work!

just a heads up- Mauve is a colour, Maeve is the Celtic goddess.
~a
person JW
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 23 - well, these are "lessons" he will enjoy giving! Umm.... Draco isn't waiting outside their rooms, ready to pounce on them, is he? She really should tell Severus about Draco's threats, as Draco may attack both Severus and Hermione - maybe Severus first. And will Narcissa also be part of the threat? Thanks for the new chapter!!
person JW
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18 - ahhhh.... thank you, thank you! I was afraid she wouldn't be honest about her feelings, and then they'd have this stupid misunderstanding and she would return to Gryffindor Tower. I like this MUCH better! Besides, she might never need to take the Mark - and could figure out how to remove his Mark after Voldy's death. Two married spies - wonderful! But are you sure he's well enough for lemons already? Those injuries were brutal!! Hmm.... she could be on top... eh, I'll just wait for you to write the next chapter. Today, please??? (wheedles)
person Severusism
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great as always, Ms Figg. Thanks for having made my day.
person Denise
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 18-20: Very nice. leave it up to snape to heal himslef faster so he can fuck!! By the way, I have jsut written a new story (MY first one WHEEE), and well I was jsut wondering if you could dedicate some of your precious time to it, and let me now if i am a failure as a writer or not! The story name is: Surrender to Slavery. Well, please update soon. cant wait to start reading the lemons!