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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person chatty
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god!!! that was HOOOOTTT!!! phew! Im looking forward to the detention more than ever.
person Sakurashope7
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats so "sweet" that he's sorry about fucking another woman instead of Hermione. Well he'd better make it up to her somehow right? :) Update soon this story is by far one of my favorites!!
person pokerfan
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ewwww...peeled bananas...oohh not the image I wanted when i go to bed tonight.....they should not have pissed off snape...oh boy!
person Laura
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story's moving along nicely. But Oh! I hate that Severus has to fuck for Voldemort! 4 years?! I hope something will happen to bring things to a head sooner....although you are quite good at writing things along quickly when need be, lol!
No worries- I love everything you write and I know I won't be disappointed in this.
So bittersweet at the timing of his acknowledgement of his love for Hermione.

Laura
person applekissis
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dayum...So much passion....lol

Well There is love now isnt it...Great chapter and wonderful story so far...More!!!
person Ms_Figg
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
JTBJAB: Hey. The ring wands won't necessarily make anyone stronger, they would just be more convenient. Folks are forever tucking wands here and there, not knowing where to put them, setting them down and not remembering where they put them etc.(I imagine lol) I seriously doubt Voldemort would get one at any rate. But who knows. Thanks for reviewing.
person Ailo
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked wicked Ms. Figg. I do so love you!

~Ailo
person droxy
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More!! Yay. You could have ended it with her delflowering and the fact she wants to stay married to him. But I think you've got something going on with Draco.

BJ inhe potion closet??
person Laura
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I knew it'd be a 2-part-deflowerment, lol!
Excellent!
Are you going to see this to the very end, with Voldemort's demise, that is? I hope so. This has, again, grown into quite a story and I'm anxious to see what Draco has planned, how deeply entrenched in the Deatheaters Hermione will become, Ron's reaction....looking forward to more!

Laura
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE cherry Lemonaid!!!!!! I agree with Hermione. I'm ready for more!!!!!

Ithilin