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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heehee his list of spells reminds me of a little boys.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EWWWW
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you there. EWWWWWWW PETER IS SO GROSS!!!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Worried about what will happen! :x
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:x!! Worried!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... Killed like a stuck pig.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't believe this story is ending. ;-;
person Queeny
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your writing style btw. I guess I need to write some more to make my style more enjoyable. Hahaha. Sad this story is over.. but hey! You have other stories to read. Bwuahaha.
And yup I figured you deserved a review where I was actually signed in.
Thanks. =)
person TCFellows
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update...good story...worth finishing!!!!!!!!
person TCFellows
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THank you...very well done!!!