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Go Hermione! Show Snape what for! LOL! Good job! Keep up the great work!

ch 24 : frantically fanning oneself **-5

wow...this story has taken many dark, but wonderful turns. i can't wait to see them being castrated. that'll be priceless if Malfoy finds them like that. haha. i can see it now. can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I have read nearly every fiction you have published here on Adultfanfiction, and probably should have reviewed before...sorry about that. I wanted to tell you that you are a phenomenal writer, the way you weave each one of your stories is amazing in the versatility alone. You manage to take key character elements and alter them enough to make them not only believable but also different from your last story. This last chapter you have added gave me chills, brava on eliciting yet again an emotional response from a reader. I thank whatever it is that inspires you as you have an incredible talent for the written word.

Ch 24 - aww, poor baby Severus.... wicked wife... snert! He's never had it so good in his life! And poor Hermione, all dominated by mean husband.... yeah, that's probably what her friends think, with Ginny the only one who has any idea of reality. Now don't forget to deal with Draco - maybe the Thestrals should stomp on him!

omfg....thats bad...please let someone have overheard draco talking in the pub...omg...someone should off the blonde bugger...anxiously awaiting the next update...keep up the good work...

Oh my! What REALLY wicked, wicked witch.

The last part of that chapter... I was shivering.... However, they should have known not to tangle with Severus.... Well, I guess they know now... not that that will help them. I never want to be on his bad side... but seeing all the lengths he will go to for one he cares about..... nice.

Inappropriate behavior indeed ^^ Loved that chapter! *grins*

Argh! Well, Snape needs to keep up his cover for Voldy, but at least he really doesn't desire other women anymore and actually loves Hermione *trying to see the the plus-side here*

Update soon, please!

wow you showed him ... please please more more ..later for now

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