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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person snapeslave
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i said it before and i will say it again...holy shit...what an awesome chapter...i loved what he did with the pensieve...lol...he said he loved her...ohh i loved it...it wasnt sweet and mushy...he claimed her first...i just loved it...this story is so freakin awesome...keep up the good work...until next update...
person pokerfan
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love all the sides to your snape...snarky, sexy, banana peeling snape (eeewwwww), in love snape......You write him so well...
person Crimson
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great work, as usual. keep it up!
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
evil cliff hanger. evil. You leave us all worked up.
person Sevvie_Bitch
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i`ve been reading her stories for a while. you can`t tell me you haven`t noticed
person Experience My Dreams
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go Severus!! Your my hero, in a sick and twisted way!! But him showed them!! I love it!! I can't wait for the next update!!
person Pam
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha, Draco got what he deserved, in my opinion anyway. Great posting, please post again soon. Thanks.
person firewall
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 30 - Sure you can make assine jokes *oops* but it's poor Hermione who is getting it in the end. Oh dear, I'd better stop. LOL Waiting for the next chapter, hope it assuages our anticipation.
person Donavon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I have been so busy lately; January is a bitch for me. Final tax returns have to be in and
Being an accountant who has clients that leave it to the last minute, gives a new meaning
To overtime. However today I had my good girl bonus,

I sat and read the chapters I have missed due to not having time to read. It is your best yet.
Brilliant, the touches you added, the chapter with Hermione with Severus's anal fuck, was brilliant
I also liked the way she handled herself with the ring.

However, to top it all, the poem...sheer poetry...to coin a phrase.

Best wishes, with thanks for a brilliant read.
person LB
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO! Evil, Evil, Evil. bad cliffie,bad. ok I'm better now. ass-tronomical! HEH! I loved that. Please update soon. I have to know how she takes in the end. HEH! Don't you just love puns? More soon please.