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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Amethystique
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! I've been away from AFF for a coule of weeks so I've a lot of reading to catch up on and so I've read this amazing work in one go!!! Quite superb Ms Figg as per usual. You really know how to manipulate the characters, mould them to your will and create such stimulating *grins evilly* works of art! I'm so anticipating the next installment of your work. I'm totally obsessed with all your writings and wait with baited breath for you next offerings. You portray a multi-dimensional array of characters, yet at the same time not taking them too far OOC. I especially admire your use of descriptive narrative with the assassins and their untimely demise at the hands of the delicious Severus. Quite a talent he has there wouldn't you say? From now on you must feed your muse well with pepper-up potion and maybe a stamina enhancer to maximise your production of the Lemony goodness that you are famous for!

LOL your fan Amethystique! ;o)X
person sheedy
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He may regret waiting to ask, by that time she will have gotten sore. Another rousing success dearie!!!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This next chapter(s) may be hard to read. Poor Hermione!!! Just how brutal will Snape get? Ouch!!! The prices these two pay to save the wizarding world! I loved it when Hermione asked Snape how he'd like a bat stuck up his ass!!! Classic!!! That's one I think we should ask men, too! Please update soon! Happy writing, doll!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K :O
person Experience My Dreams
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go for it Hermione!!!! DO it!!! Good chapter I can't wait for the next one!!!
person Pastel
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It's great.
person lizzie
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe you used that pun either lol but at least it fit. keep it going and good job.
person ccrawley
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 28: Loved it. Loved it. Draco got his and Hermione finally got hers.
person Sevvie_Bitch
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your writing sounds like charmy's
person chatty
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
draco is no more a threat! yay!!! i was beginning to think he was going to be another villain other than voldy. anyhow it turned out good.

The love scene with severus and Hermione was too touching. I think this is the only story where you are making it veeeeeeeeeeeeeeery emotional. its good i love it.
person Miepje
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, if Snape goes out to get revenge he really gets it! *phew* Well, that takes care of Draco at least...
Loved the poetry and the love-admission afterwards. They're really close now; they'll need that when Hermione's spying begins...

Great story; more please!