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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Sakurashope7
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat with anticipation. You are a VERY good writer....:) I know that its going to be VERY ruff and brutal....but maybe afterwards Severus will make it up to her..after she recovers of course....I also REALLY want to see how Severus will act.....*wondering*
person Experience My Dreams
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter... Lord how bad will this be?? Like other of your stories maybe?? I can't wait but yet I am alittle scared for Hermione....
person Experience My Dreams
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil Evil Woman you are leaving it off there!!! I can't take it please update soon!!!
person beeky63
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Things are getting pretty heavy. Great story! Can't wait for more.
Toodles.
person chatty
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is getting good. cant wait for hermione to join the club and beat voldy's ass. lol. some sacrifices have to be made tho on hermiones side atleast she will be taking that potion. i hope there arent a lot of deatheaters around when the act is done. cant wait for the next chapters.
person firewall
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 35 Oh boy, that was brutal. Hope there is enough elixer left and that she can forgive him.
person jin
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was exilent, Snape is perfect. Write more!...please
person whatever
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn was right s**** even i feel used lordie please update soon
person Phantasia
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a update? Cant wait to find out more.
Phantasia :P
person Darque Hart
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have noticed in quite a few of your stories, as in this chapter, where you do not use the title of Madam for the school healer/nurse. It sounds very disrespectful.

Students and especially the headmaster in speaking to students would definitely refer to her as MADAM Pomfrey and not simply use her last name. If the person speaking to Madam Pomfrey had a closer relationship with her and there were no students around, they would call her Poppy.

"Madam" seems to be the 'title' of non-professorial women ... Hooch, Pince, Pomfrey.