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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person pokerfan
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while....

I was wondering how you would handle this chapter. The ritual scene was brutal to read (and I am sure it was hard to write) but was perfectly executed. You just know that Voldemort does much worse...it was excellent. As always, I should not have worried how you would handle the aftermath. It was perfect!

I love the fact that the "true" lemons are still to come. Tonight maybe?? pretty please.....
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! you are so sneaky! *lol* And I can't believe that you're seriously asking that question! A BIG FAT LEMON! (*shakes head at her thought of being only implied*)
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definitely want to read chapter 35 RIGHT now. please please please post it!
person Ladytalon
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whooo! Is it hot in here or is it just your writing?????
person JTBJAB
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh the anticipation! I feel for Hermione right now! I really do! I'm just glad Voldie let them off as lightly as he has!
person Miepje
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Hermione and Severus have some hard times ahead of them. I hope the potion will Hermione cope and that they will be okey together afterwards...
*phew* Lots to happen. Update soon, please!!
person Miepje
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
will HELP Hermione cope (argh(
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome updates! I loved how Severus drove Draco insane with that pensive! It rocked! I also loved how Severus broke her in. lol. It was great! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Sakurashope7
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat with anticipation. You are a VERY good writer....:) I know that its going to be VERY ruff and brutal....but maybe afterwards Severus will make it up to her..after she recovers of course....
person JTBJAB
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, as soon as I read the line 'I'll be back', Severus turned into Arnie... and he suddenly had a gun strapped to his side instead of his wand. Lol! My mind is weird, I know, but still .... I look forward to the next chapter - I'm desperate to know what Voldemort's response is!