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well....it has been a while since i have reviewed....but damn!! that chapter about hermione being raped...well im not usually squemish..but wow.....it was well written, but who ever knew that severus was sooo mean....that chapter gave me a cold feeling......i wouldnt let my husband come near me for 2 hours....lol. i also wanted to congratulate you, not many people could have written a chapter like that. It is really amazing how you can write really sexy and hot scenes and hen you can write these really explicit and dark sex scenes...now that is talent.

Yeah you should write the lemons...how about some lemonade, lemon pie, lemon ice cream, lemon coughdrops....haha if your getting the idea...;)

Oh you better write that out!! I mean hell you went through all the trouble to set it up and pull us into reading it you better damn well deliver!!!! Not that I don't have faith in your writing but how can you ask us a question like that?? Do we want you to continue with that scene?? Well I don't know about everyone else but I do damn it!! Great chapter one of my favorites in the story!!!

LEMONS please!!!!!! You know there has to be explosive sex after all that.

Chapter 36 - I was very narrowminded. I had only thought of Hermione and had given Severus no thought whatsoever. I never thought that he would feel so strongly about brutalizing her. I read how he removed himself from the act but didn't give it any thought. Hmmm, his love is deep. Nicely developed Ms Figg.

Eh, either way works for me. I'd rather of had Severus do her without the effects of the potion, but.. that would have taken awhile, wouldn't it? But maybe it would have been worth the wait..

Not complaining, of course. You're the worshipfulgoddessauthorcreature, not me. <3

Us? Lusty? You don't say... ;) . Full lemon please...

chp 37: You should definatley write the lemons. nad hten you should add some of their thoughts maybe...this is an importnatn turn in the story, becaue it is the first time they have sex after severus brutalized her...so we need to know how it is.....cant wait to see what you decide to do. Please update soon!

Oh, Hermione is ruthless. But Severus needs to get over his guilt. The lemons can be implied, I don't mind. I'm reading your stories for the plot not only the sex.

Ps. Congratulation on getting nominated at Multifaceted (three times if I counted correctly). I will vote for you. ^__^

Wow! Poor Hermione and poor Severus. I feel bad for them. I hope he can ease her pain and I hope she doesn't withdraw from him. Update again and soon! I can't wait to read more!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany