rate_review Reviews

You know, I was beginning to wonder if you ever slept! I am online almost 24/7 myself and every time I look you have a new chapter or two up. And I look for them quite often. I would think that a lemon would be good here, as not only to take the bad memory away from Severus, but also for your readers. Remember, the last we saw of Severus and Hermione together like that he was brutal. A little lovin' would not go amiss, I should think. By the way, I don't think that I have ever reviewed one of your fics before, and it is a complete oversight on my part. I am such a bad reader and fellow author. I do have to say that I very much like your stories and am very much impressed with your stamina for writing, lol. You are doing so well and I can't wait for your next chapter(s).

The last few chapters were difficult to read but they were also well written and emotionally powerful. Bravo Ms. Figg, Bravo.
Toodles.

Ch 36 - yay, Hermione! I'm glad she's starting to slap some sense into him. Heck, she walked willingly in there to take the Mark and to become a spy. Because she has Severus to help her, she's better off than he was when HE became a spy. And she and all her friends will be free when Voldy dies. Deal with it, Severus - snap out of the pity party! (Hmm, maybe he can let Hermione whip him... make him feel better...)

So well done. . . .and i like the way you had Hermione tell him to stop punishing her, too. You kept her personality very in tact. You've done such wonderful work on the whole story! the actual ritual was well done, too, very detached which is how i imagine they both were though the whole thing potions and whatever else. I'm glad Hermione was all fixed so easily b/c even at the end of that description i couldn't help but curl into myself a little- nicely done.

Keep up the good work! ~a

Oh please make it a lemon! Please, A little tender passionate loving for Severus so he can show himself he won't hurt her.

I won't lie, the ritual did make me uneasy but it was there for a reason. I did think you might loose me there but you are such a fantastic author I can't seem to leave these stories alone. I have faith in your writing and know somehow that those parts that make me uneasy will make the story that much more of a masterpiece in the end....does that make sense? I know what I mean but can't seem to write it today. Its one of those backward days.


Well anyway my dear. You still have me eagerly awaiting your next update. Keep up the amazing work.

I hope Hermione and Severus Kick moldy's arse! lol

ch 37 : what, you could just imply a lemon and not write it ? what are you thinking ? Of course I want the whole lemon !

i hope mione can help him thought this please please update soon .. later for now

angel

ugh! it just keeps getting better and better, not saying that im a fan of the violence or condoning it but you are such a talented writer. the story has become so compelling and i cant wait to read more! keep up the great work!

LEMONS please!!!!!! You know there has to be explosive sex after all that.

LEMON!!!! puhleeze!