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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Lassie
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear, you're my hero when it comes to writing free lance stories. I love reading and writing in general, and I think your talent is amazing. Especially your speed. I absolutely look forward to reading your stuff because I always know it's good! Keep it up!
person Laura
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As if we wouldn't want to read this lemon!! Please, bring it on!

I loved the ritual- it was as dark, creepy and violent as I believe Voldemort would want it. Thank goodness Severus had that elixr.

This story is really wonderful- can't wait to read more, more more!

Laura
person droxy
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is a very lovely scene and very logical of her to come to those conclusions.
person droxy
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write the lemon!! AFF is having troubles and I fially got a review window!!! It is intersting seeing a remorseful severus, hopefully he can transmute that feeling into revenge
person Ms_Figg
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anon: The assault was indeed brutal, and the believability issue you've brought up is addressed in this conversation from the chapter "Coming to Terms"

"I healed you physically, Hermione, but how about emotionally? The elixir doesn
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This scene was handled wonderfully. I agree that Severus needs to be fully in control of himself.
person Darque Hart
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 37 -- What do you mean you're going to bed? Here I thought you sat up 34/7 and typed, smoke pouring off the keyboard! You MUST write the lemons! You Must. You Must! I do not have lust potion to give my wizard and drooling over Sev and Mione is often the most excitement I get. I NEED THIS! So, yes, write the lemons. [I know, TMI.]
person angel
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write the actual lemon .. ~grins ~ you know you want to ... please .....later for now

angel
person Know-it-all
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO! A lemon! You have to have one!
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ggrrrr please update!!! I hope there is an update when i get back from work! (in 5 hours)

please please please

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