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for Disharmony in the Dungeons

by Ms_Figg

person Moyra
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I
person MrsStrawberry
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Up to chp 39! I go away for a short while and find your new fic almost completed! Wow Figgy...this is really dark for you..?...is this going to be YOU from now on......a surprizing change....but I must admit to prefering your previous style! Not that this isn't rivetting...coz it is! Can't wait to see how the Snapes 'doctor' Voldy's elixir via that ratty wormtail....hope he gets his come uppance for Harry's sake too?Please update/finish....am v.impatient like everyone else no doubt!
person ozarkmoon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such an evil cliffie at the end of this chapter.. implied lemons indeed! That will get you demoted in the Smut Writers Society of America! Love Albus' little comoment of "upstanding". Hee hee!
person Koda
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good to see good old Severus back. And Pettigrew's nasty. Ugh.
person JW
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 39 - ah, perks!! Whatever it takes to turn on Severus, that's what she has to do! I do hope she doesn't actually have to "do" Pettigrew, the rat who betrayed Harry's parents and helped bring Voldy back and killed Cedric. Yup, Pettigrew can stand in front of Voldy's new flame-thrower curse.... Thanks for updating!
person chatty
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh good god. this is getting good as ever. now its not only going to be the most incredible makeup sex, its also going to be with a jealous severus. Can it get any better. waiting for ur next chapter. :)
person sheedy
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sneaky Hermione very sneaky.
person firewall
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 38 - I re-read my other posts and it seems I did think of poor Sevvie and the impact of the ritual on his psyche. I gues I'm not as mean as I thought I was. *grin* Hermione definitely has a touch of Slytherin in her. I like it. Hmmhmmhmmhmmhmm. Well now, Ms Figg, I think with that potion it's going to be an every oriface encounter. Don't you?
person Ladytalon
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Miepje
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Hermione got through the horrible ritual without permanent damage, but I feel bad for Severus. The guilt is very understandable, if a bit new for him. He really doesn't know how to deal with it, but luckily Hermione does ^^

Update soon, and with some lovely lemons, please!!