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for The More Things Change

by SinfulSnape

person luvhp
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
That was sad.
It's so easy to misunderstand peopel and whe you don't talk things out everyone gets hurt, been there done that too many times.
Very well done story!!!
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person oetbmalfoysmom
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a nicely written story. I'm a sucker for post-Hogwarts D/H fics. It seems like Draco and Hermione were both suffering from overzealous pride. I like the fact that it was Draco who took the first step towards initiating a reconciliation. Thanks!
person Remetan
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unlike your other reviewers, I think this fic is lovely, very well developed, and with a compelling plot and comfortable pacing. The only thing that I feel falls short of the mark is the end. For some reason, it feels like it rushes from the moment Hermione arrives back at her place, and there doesn't seem to be enough of an emotional impetus to makeup so quickly after three years of misunderstandings and anger. Other than that, well done!
person sheedy
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great one shot!!!!