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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. This chapter was all sorts of trouble! There is one thing, plot-wise wrong with things, considering Snape is a double agent and Lucius supposedly under the imperious during the last war, they would never discuss the "Dark Lord" in public. If they do, the code would have to be better than that. Other than that, it was a great chapter.
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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HURRY UP!!!!!!! lol
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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank u so much for this update. Please dont let this story die. You must finish it. Youve given a unique stroke of life and romance to HG and SS and u need to see it through....for them. You dont even have to do a giant battle scene with voldemort. U can sum it up in one chapter and get back to their growing romance and feelings.
My heart melted when hermione picked out those rings. Now i want to exhange my diamond bank and make my husband and i get matching ones like that. I see u have messenger. Im gonna dowload it on my phone and add u. So if theres and inspiration or moral support i can give u...im there. Besides im pregnant and due in a month. Im going to go on vacation soon and will have nothing to do but worry about HG and SS....your wonderful and brilliant...ur writing brings things to life! Please keep it coming. Also best steamy scenes ever. Because its tasteful and believe able.
Pammy
My heart melted when hermione picked out those rings. Now i want to exhange my diamond bank and make my husband and i get matching ones like that. I see u have messenger. Im gonna dowload it on my phone and add u. So if theres and inspiration or moral support i can give u...im there. Besides im pregnant and due in a month. Im going to go on vacation soon and will have nothing to do but worry about HG and SS....your wonderful and brilliant...ur writing brings things to life! Please keep it coming. Also best steamy scenes ever. Because its tasteful and believe able.
Pammy
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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next part please please write the whole story its thrilling and gripping my heart ...........amazingggggggg
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March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love how Hermione is breaking through Severus' barriers and letting him feel wanted. Can't wait for more.
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March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet! I love how you manage to keep Snape in character while making him this akward and innocent virgin. I just can't tell you how much I love this idea, this story and these characters. It was my first Snape/Hermione fanfic, but I liked it so much I went looking for others while I wait for an update, and I still haven't found one that I like this much.
Update soon, please!
Update soon, please!
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March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is my fav story ever. My fav version of sev ever. Please finish give me more. Ur amazing
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March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it so far! It's almost like a reverse marriage law situation. It's refreshing to see Hermione taking more of a leading role. Don't get me wrong I love a dominant Severus but occasionally I like to see Hermione take control. Can't wait for the wedding night! Update soon please :)
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March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i do love this story and cant wait for more.....PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON
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March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Also DAMN I did not realize how old this was. Please tell me you have more chapters planned. I'm hooked and I would be very disappointed to see it end up abandoned.