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If that darn taciturn man would just learn to speak his mind, this would go a whole lot smoother for both of them! ARGH!!! For such a thick-headed person, he's incredibly thin-skinned. And, making their first time an unmitigated disaster is certainly no way to get started on their way. Sigh... This poor couple has A LONG way to go. But, I am glad Molly, Arthur and Bill at least tried to be supportive of her. And, regardless of their feelings, at least Harry and Ron showed up. That's something at least. Man, I hope he lets his guard down at least a little, so that they can both try to enjoy some of their wedding night. Fingers crossed for a miracle! Thanks, HG4eva

Poor Hermione!

I really love your story so far. Just a quick random thought...I was just on fanfiction.net and because they seem to get more new stories and I was backreading old ones. I was amazed at how childish (of course as it's for under 18) they were. The sense of humor is that of my 13 year sister. So here I wandered on not thinking anything new would be up and luckily there was your story. Now normally I'm all for a mature "worldly" Snape but I figured I'd give it a shot and I'm so glad I did. First off, I was so impressed with the humor you gave Snape. It was fitting for his character perfectly. It wasn't childish and nor was a passive simpleton just because he's a virgin. Brava!! I am only up to Chapter "Monday" but I am of course continuing I just couldn't wait to add my 2 cents. The teacup part......now THAT was funny. I could actually see them saying things like that. Good Job for keeping in character while exploring a not often explored territory (virgin Snape), for humor befitting the actual character, and maturity of writing style.

Oh and I apologize in advance for my review and American spelling of "humor". sorry.

dear author nightowl...plz plz plz complete ths story i am almost dying to see the wedding night of hermione and severus.......... i just love severus in your story so plz plz plz complete ittttt

I am miserable without an update. Even that one scene between them when hermione crawled on his lap was hotter than my wedding night. No lie. Im possessed by this story its all i ever think about. Oh how i want severus to give into his passion for the girl. To leave her mindless lol

please write the whole story its really gr8 this story

I'm so in love with this story. It's just wonderful to read. I'm GLAD that they now have to be open about their engagement. I think they are so perfect for each other. I don't normally read many Snape stories because of the age difference but he is my favorite character and I love how you have written him.

Now you have asked about a beta for this story and I hate the thought that you won't post new chapters because you are waiting to have a beta check them! I personally don't think your story needs one but I know it makes an author feel more secure if someone looks it over. You don't have many errors that distract from your story and I love the way your story has progressed.

I do beta for several Naruto-verse authors (and if they are reading this where are your new chapters! :(
and RL during the school year is suckily busy... but this story is too awesome to wait lol.

So if you don't have a beta for this story feel free to drop me a line. I'm moodysavage@yahoo.com :)

still awesome

Ahhhh, this was a wonderful read. Thanks for updating it! I can't wait to see what you've got going on for it (not even ending-specific, just as a whole!). :3