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for Kiss The Serpent

by indigonightowl

schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This isn't the end is it? Because the sex scenes of the last two chapter were great and I want more! Update soon!
schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story. I am soooooo glad you made her more clear-headed than any other person on the planet, though. He is so confused and unsure that it's almost sad. And, if he doesn't learn to speak before he makes a stupid-ass move, I will have to enter the story just to smack him around a bit. lol Thanks again! HG4eva
person Kielyn80
schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, please add more chapters soon. It was lovely that the two of them were new to their sexuality and could explore it together. I just hope Severus doesn't get a bout of guilt but decides to enjoy this new aspect of his life. Please also give harry his happy ending too!
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let u know im really missing ur updates. I need more please!!!!!!!!!!! Im on maternity leave and home all day bored. Waddling around lol please give my mind something to think about rather than my upcoming labor!
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my god oh my god oh my god! update woman! please? PRETTY PLEASE? You can't just leave me hanging after that.
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Glad to see it updated and hope there will be more to come!
person Avivafae
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a very sultry and well written chapter. I hope there is more to come.
person anyesha
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please write the next chapter
person DawnEB
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love the way you got them to work it out together, how each of them gains confidence with the other. Now I shall wait eagerly to see how things work out the next morning!
person anyesha
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wonderfull delicious .......its amazzingggggg..