rate_review Reviews

I really have enjoyed this!

I love this story. I love everything about this story. From the whole Sev staying a virgin because Voldemort needed him to for a potion, to the scenes with Hermione. I can't wait to read more. Favorite story in a long time.

I am really enjoying this so far and even have an idea of who the prophecy could be referring to. Only time will tell if I am correct or not. :)

Oh noes. Poor Harry. The story, however is super awesome!

The whole process sounds gross. Great update!

wasn't as fond of this chapter. The content is fine but it felt very disjointed. Just when I got into the flow of one part it would jump and i'd have to refind the flow only for it to happen again. The Draco/Harry scene felt rushed, though I liked that Pansy turned up. Not sure what to make of the last part with the alchemy. Again the content was good but I felt that he was talking more to another professor rather than Hermione. Even though she is clever it would have made more sense to me for him to dumb down what he was saying to make sure that she could follow what was being described and be able to give thoughtful input about it also the connection was missing between them in the last part. His eureka moment should have had more impact when he discovered that the snake was the key. Even grabbing Hermione and kissing her in the spur of the moment before lowering his eyes again and continuing while pointing to the passage would have given the connection some oomph. To me the little things like quick glances or watching him speak or the eureka were missing. I think if the flow was smoother it may not have been so noticeable but perhaps that is just me.

I hope we get more Draco/Harry turmoil with how the kiss ended. Look forward to seeing what comes next.

that's because I luuuuuvvvv this story... so of COURSE you will be finishing... it would be a crime not to! :)

need more of this story please...............................

Maybe this will be the impetus he needs to tell her that he wants things to be a bit more permanent. Her love and bravery can only take them so far. :-) Thanks! HG4eva

I hope this story does not end here! I want more Snape and Hermione goodness!