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for Kiss The Serpent

by indigonightowl

person Susa
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mhwa ha ha ha ha

Crazy Story! Please continue
person rachel
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
abosolutely fabulous chapter, thank you for the update, and i love the scene at the end. brillant. it will be interesting to see how the two interact with each other being married and everything, i look foward to more great updates.
person Rebecca
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Snape as a virgin? Yummy!!! I really like how you descripe the feelings and thoughts of your characters, Snapes insecurities are really touching, and Hermionies
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a great story so far! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person Morrigan
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the few stories, in which Severus is a virgin. Most fics have him rather dominant, but maybe this time, he will pass the lead to someone else and let himself introduse to the world of pleasure? That is, if Hermionie is experienced at all, you didn
person Ceridwen
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that
person rachel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh i like this story very much! great idea with the prophecy, and the enemy that hates and loves, hmmm wonder who that is...looking forward to updates as soon as you can, see how snape deals with hermione, who i absolutely love speaking out for him and herself. keep writing!
person sheila
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hermione you are in for it now!!!! This is a really great fic please update soon.
person Edania
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh very good! Ha the look on his face, oh i can picture it now lol. Very damn good story.
person rhia
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite a new approach, I'm enthralled; please update soon!