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for Kiss The Serpent

by indigonightowl

person Briar (not signed in)
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay with the Yayedness!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY more! I love it thanks for notifying me btw i cant wait till you update!!!!!
~Briar~
person Guinnevere
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang! I was under the impression that 'Kiss The Serpent' was complete. It's very good, and I'm enjoying the humor of it. Please do update soon.
person Edania
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god is just so cute ( if i had not said that enough already) SOOo cute!. He she kissed him twice and got him to stay shut twice now.
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter!! Very well done on the Sevy pov!! I like how Albus is sticking his nose in everything as usual!! Keep up the great work!! Thanks for updating so soon and please do it again soon!!

Alauralen
person septentrion
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 5 : will you give some Severus's POV ? It'd be interesting to know what he felt with that kiss. I like the way Hermione reacted. I'm all with her !
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the ending for chapter 5. I think it was hilarious. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read more.
person Hypatia
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your rendition of Snape and Hermione so far is spot on and delightfully in character!! Can't wait to see what continues to unfold between these two.
person a_reader
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I like how you've managed to present a inexperienced Snape without making him pathetic -- despite the deep embarassment. This is a good read :)
person k
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was hilarious.
person Edania
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have her get mad more often, i love the story!