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for Kiss The Serpent

by indigonightowl

person Ailo
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo another good chapter! I know Severus is confused and all, but I wonder when his Slytherin side is going to come out full force and take over the whole kissing situation. He may be confused but that doesn't make him any less horny and he'll figure it out soon enough I imagine :) Can't wait to see more!

Until then, I remain droolfully yours,
Ailo
person lil
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so good, it's original, can't wait till the next update!
person rachel
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved the ending! so glad for hermione to get the upper hand there. i cant wait to see how their relationship develops, please update soon.
person Pam
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Ladytalon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kind of disappointed about the teacup incident - a toilet seat would have been more appropriate to Draco's disposition, lol. I like the fact that BOTH of them are virgins, sets the stage quite nicely for some awkward fumbling in later chapters. Update as soon as you can, pleeeeaaassseee. :)
person Morrigan
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, Hermionie is a virgin, too. That ougth to be interesting! I hope she keeps being kind of aggressive though, since I must confess I am little bit into Femdom.
Thanks for the great chapter, although I
person a_reader
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update! You've struck such a good and consistent tone with both of your characterizations... That's so important to making a story believeable. Keep the chapters coming!
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person Ceridwen
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"His words had been intended to discomfit her, but the graphic image it conjured in his mind, and the fact he had said it to a student, made him blush faintly instead - which completely ruined the effect"

That
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!! OMG this story is just great!! I am totally loving it!! The ending to chapter 5 rocked!! I don't know who I feel more sorry for Hermione or Severus!! Keep up the great work and please update soon!!

Alauralen