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for Kiss The Serpent

by indigonightowl

person anya
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How sad that they didn't kiss after that walk...
person Anguloce
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far i really like how this is progressing! please update soon!
person Guinnevere
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I can think of is: ...and THEN what happened? Good fic.
person Nyt22
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that this is one of the best fics I have read in a while. It's well constructed, the characters are portrayed very well, and it is amazingly interesting. You have an excellent form of writing. I'm eager to see where the next chapter goes. Hopefully, the next chapter will be soon. (hint, hint).
person Briar (yet again not signed in)
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! I love this fic but it gets me sad that Severus gets so down on himself... oh well write more quick!
~Briar~
person Ailo
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must have more, I can't take the suspense!!
person applekissis
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell u I liked this chapter..I like the way the story is going and look forward to reading more!
person Starbridge
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arrrggghhh!!!!! Kiss her you dimwit! I think perhaps Hermione needs to have a little talk with him about making memories. :)
person Miepje
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Argh! He should have just kissed her!
Although it is good of him to let her "dictate the speed", there should be some forward movement, right? ^^

Looking forward to more of this story, so update soon, please?!
person Athena
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how awkward he is with her. Its so human of him! I can't wait to see what happens next!