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for You Bet

by Jemixe

person amber
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was one of the hottest fics I have ever read!!!
person Eirenei
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good.

Your writing is so hot that could be used instead of sun. Please write a sequel, maybe how were the two naughty Death Suckers ''cum'' to that bet, and their feelings at Harry's shock at their admission.

What about reaction of Harry's friends, Draco, Ginny?

See ya soon,

Eirenei
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet jesus dancing on jellyied toast... i think i need to take a long, long, long... cold shower. excuse me.
person HOTNESS!!
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WoW! This is excellent! I absolutely adore threesomes and you have illustrated all the reasons why I do! :D
Please write more of these...and I can tell why I love this story so much...I have read most of the other works you've written; brilliant stuff!
Please write more!!!!!
-Addicted,
MaryB
person Lilliputian722
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story.....the chemistry was hot!
person Elizabeth
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should make another chapter or a sequel.. BETTER YET! MAKE IT A STORY. I WOULD READ IT!