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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was extremely hot
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHHH that was suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper HOT!!!!! YUMM YUMM!! *drools*
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL...... PLEEEEEAAASEEE
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I freaking love this oneshot! I've read it before, and I like to keep reading it again! This is the only fanfic I've read with a Harry/Severus/Lucius pairing. Do you know any other fanfics with that pairing? Please let me know, I really can't find any.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That story was freakin awesome! You're very good at writing. I hope you write a sequel.
x dark vineyard
x dark vineyard
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw man...i hope you can find a squel or two in you cause that was f*ckin wonderful...you know your a GREAT writer
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't really think Harry should have been double penetrated when he was a virgin, but over all it was a good story. I personally would re-write part of it to make a second chapter and put the double penetration for several months after they started having sex.
Anal sex can be painful with just one penetrating you until you are used to it, two when you haven't even been broken in is worse I am sure. Nice sex scene all around, if you hadn't put Harry as a virgin, it might not have felt a little "wrong" in the physical sense.
Anal sex can be painful with just one penetrating you until you are used to it, two when you haven't even been broken in is worse I am sure. Nice sex scene all around, if you hadn't put Harry as a virgin, it might not have felt a little "wrong" in the physical sense.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very tastly.... very hott
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please let there be more
you have to write more!!!!
this was HOT!
loved it and if there is not another cahpter please do a sequal
you have to write more!!!!
this was HOT!
loved it and if there is not another cahpter please do a sequal
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2 cocks..is too much IMO
:( not really possible..if it is..it must be dangerous at some point.
:( not really possible..if it is..it must be dangerous at some point.