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for Without You

by wiccanb1tch

schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi... I really like this so far... I'd really like to see more... Really soon.

I'll even go as far as to say please. Coming from a Slytherin, you should be rather inspired to write more. Soon, preferably. Just sayin.

Please and thank you!
Until next time,
Alena
person heather
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
odd, deffinately interesting, and i hope you find the inspiration to do another chapter, i'd like to see how this is going to go
person mphoenix
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww..... yes i said awwwwwww..... draco was kinda cute there at the en.d..
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 2! Holy moly! Harry and Dudley getting along. Draco and Harry sending each other letters. Draco looking up sexual spells. Gotta have more!
person Jenna
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm thoroughly amused by this. then again draco, harry being a machinist is always amusing! yum. more i say, give me more!
person C
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please....this is going to be very interesting...continue and let me beta!!!! i am the beta!!! good length me like. updates are mandatory!!
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute.....and way ooc like you said but I like it.....Update soon.
person LadyX
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this sounds like its gonna be great!! Cant wait for more...but could you use Ya a little bit less? its a tad annoying. update soon!
person jives
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM

can't wait for an update!! please make it real hot :P