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for Birthday Cumuppance

by tlb69

person luv-blonde-bunny
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
rofl! that was awesome! lol only 5 though? my personal best is somewhere around 9. but i forget - it's hard for me to keep count after 5. i've heard some lucky bastards can reach 12. yikes! maybe w/ a whole 24 hrs! XD lol amAZING story though! totally hot. so freaking YUMMY! >.<

keep on writing,

luv-blonde-bunny
person Juana13
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh wow
hot and yet so sinful
: )
person Fate-Angel
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*speachless*...huh, what? Oh, right...
That was really REALLY REEEAAAALLLY good.
Keep writing such woderful stories to share with us
=^-^=
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it diffrent paring next time though
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was alright, pretty rough; I don't think I could imagine James being rough, I thought him more of maybe gentle?
person LilyLady
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute
person LJ
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Silly me, I thought that they ran a joke shop!"

Exellent.
person Virginia
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The "idea" of Harry & James disturbs me, but the story was completely HOT ... I just have to focus on the sex and not the incest part. Nicely written.
person Shardae
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cute in a sorta sick way....
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved!!!!!
*Grins*