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for A picnic

by acciosanity

person Persy
schedule January 24, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Cute!!!

person Anon
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person just discovered
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very funny... especially the end.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic! I love how Severus calls the child "Baby Snape" or "Snape Baby". It's absolutely cute, and I especially loved the way you ended the story. I've always had a soft spot for the giant squid (with heartburn)!
person Nina
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fic. Funny and well written. great job and I'm loving your new story. Keep the great work!
person Elena
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good but you should make it into a story instead of a one-shot.
person SnapesPet30
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL that was great, that poor squid getting heartburn from eating the blanket *giggles* Hermione is one inventive woman. :)
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This definately brought a smile to my morning.
person k
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the best part was about the squid.