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for Not Fair

by Raincloud

person Jessifer
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neh...I like the concept of this story a lot...

...is it ever going to be updated again? :(
person Serenity J.
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FOR...THE...LOVE...OF...GOD...PLEASE...CONTINUE!!!!
person HPlover
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You better write another chpater, because I'm deeply in love with this story. Good job and update soon.
person jenn
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes, i really loved this chapter, it explained a lot and now i am definitely going to keep up with it, i just can't wait to see how things turn out
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am pleased to note that during reading this my breath is bated, my heart beat is loud in my ears. I thoroughly enjoyed his chapter, it helps you connect the two characters, put together the broken pieces of the old and put together some thign new, I await your next chapter.
~K.Feles~
person cassie
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful start, I love your characterizations and the whole scenario is original. I like the Ron/Draco pairing but have only found a couple of R/D fics that appeal and I think your fic is going to be one of them. Looking forward to the next chapter.

cheers
Cassie
person Natacha
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I sooooo want to read the next chapter!!! Haa!
person May
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes it answers my question. (I asked about happy ending because I once started reading a story and in the last chapter the main character died, so a happy ending would be if draco and ron end up together and alive ^_^).
This chapter is even better than the first :) Update again soon.
person Lilliputian722
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the start to this....hope you update soon.
person The_Priestess00
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh, love your story:) write more:) i really like ron/draco parring but they are far to little to find:(
bad harry [hits him with HP book pack] bad!

p.s.sorry for bad english:) i don't come from english language country. i come from poland:) pretty country by the way it is