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I love the way they react to each other. Snape is so snarky in this one! Keep 'um coming!

I clicked on the link you left on WIKTT (or one of those yahoo groups). I think you're doing a wonderful job, I LOVE your take on the challenge. I hope you update again very very soon. Please post the link on WIKTT (or whatever it was you posted this one on) so I can tell when this story has been updated. Again, I beg, please update soon!

Well, its your story, and you are free to make the characters any way you like. Having said that, out of the trio, Hermione is the most apt to think outside the box. So she would be more inclined to not believe what happened and perhaps think there was more to it than meets the eye with Snape killing Dumbledore. At the end of HBP, she had already found out something about Snape and tried to tell Harry, only to be promptly ignored.

very good! I like it alot (although I am unfamiliar with the story). I googled it and have decided I like the sound of the summary given and I am going to try and find it!


I do have a few suggestions though.

Are you going to do anything back in 'real world', will say Molly find the book, begin to read it and see Severus and Hermione's names in there? Then what will she do? Head to Hogwarts and discover that Albus is actually alive? Will there be a group of people (Dumbledore, Molly, Minerva, and a few other teachers and older order members) all reading the book together to see if Snape and Hermione hook up?

Please do update soon. I go back to uni soon and wont be reading fanfic much anymore. BUt i will continur to read this story! If you could email me when you update, i would appreciate it very mcuh!

EmZ
magicstar008@hotmail.com

Hey, not bad. I myself love romance novels and always put myself in the lead characters part. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep 'em coming.

Ch 1-2: interesting start, good dialogue, I like the verbal sparring. I like the idea that Snape has help (Hagrid) taking care of an ill Dumbledore and that they pulled off a mock death. Can you tell me, however, how does Snape get pulled into the book? Thanks for your story. Tiny grammer suggestion: double check use of "your" "you're" "there" they're" :-)

Wow.

ooh, this is going to be good, I can tell. Feel the Sev/Herm passion...gorgeous!
One thing though; a tiny point I know, but one that irks me somewhat (sorry! I'm the teensiest bit pedantic when it comes to this) In England it's mum, not mom.
Other than that, keep it up!

Interesting start. I wonder what Severus has up his sleeves. Update again and soon.

Tiffany

chp 1-2: I really like the story idea, and teh way you are writing it! its hard to believe that it is your first HG/SS....everyone seems so in character. well as of now, no criticism to give...lol...im jsut waiting for the next chapter! Please update soon!