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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. I am quite interested in seeing how this story progresses. Nice start!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you have my attention. Please write more soon. Very soon. Like yesterday soon. This chapter was incredible. Very well written to rope anyone into what promises to be an intense story. I have so many questions, but I trust that most will be answered in your own time. I love this story so far. Keep up the great work.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thisss isss a great ssstart. Pleassse continue and update sssoon. Thank you.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, More PLEASE!!!!!
I love your writting style, fresh and new.
Please update.
Ysth
I love your writting style, fresh and new.
Please update.
Ysth
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the first chapter of your story. My one complaint? That there was a cliffhanger!! grr!! j/k... welll sort of, lol, I definately did not enjoy that cliffhanger, but it definately does make me want to read more. I hope the next chapter is up soon!!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've got my attention!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i likew it i want to see were it goes
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I must admit, the descriptiveness of this story was beautiful. It placed me, often times, right there in the story. I can hardly wait until the next chapter... or however many until this story is finished. I really want to see this all the way through.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now that's a great beginning! Love the Warrior Angel concept - and of course, anything that makes Severus happy makes me happy! Looking forward to your next chapter!