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A good start to a story. I like your 'straight to the point' style. It's something I find immensely difficult to get straight myself. Please more...

The writing's ok.. The characters are a bit OOC, though.

Out of character... Quite a lot of spelling errors..

Good, please update soon!

Great first chapter but are you going to carry on? You haven't updated in a while and this could be a really good story. Please update soon.

i think u should write more
and if u do i cant wait to read it

You didn't write enough for anyone to be able to tell what the quality of the story or really writing is going to be. You had Ginny jump immediatly back into Harrys arms when she clearly had issues, but that can be forgiven if you don't keep throwing people arround. I would never post anywhere near this short of a chapter and expect a sigle review with any useful insight to be able to be made. Quite frankly you haven't given us enough to have any idea what to expect of the rest of the story or to know if we should even come back here for more of it. I was thoroughly disappointed. All this chapter did was tease me about what might be withought giving me anything.

Very good!! Keep it up, mabye add a little ron and hermionie action!! ;}

OMG That was Great!!!!!! I've never seen a fanfic that stayed on with the books!!!! AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T STOP!!!!! KEEP GOING. THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

plz write more. its a really good idea and u put it into action so well