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person Helgudo
schedule February 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Delightfully fluffy and sweet and deeply arousing. I love this story to pieces. I could actually picture Harry and Hermione doing this, and your portrayal of her especially is just perfect.

person the_scribbler
schedule December 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a fun, smutty, entertaining story! GOOD JOB! I really enjoyed your descriptions and the way that you wrote Harry's awkwardness and Hermione's sweetness. It was a lot of fun :)
person bean1498
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice. :) Sweet and young H/Hr fic. :) Normally I don't care for fics where they are that young, but this was fairly tame and had a kind of coming into their own feel to it, so it's cool. :) Thank you for sharing it with us.
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am not sure if i have revied this before but it occoured to me that i have read it atleast three times so i just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed it. Your charaterization is right on, the story flows beautifully. It seems entirely plausable for it to happen in cannon..you know...if they weren't classified as childrens books lol
person t
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!!
so sweet!!!
person firelordeg
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this please wright some more
person THX1138
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot. One of the best H/HR stories here. But that is not so hard. Nevertheless ... I really really like this. Thanks for writing.
person angel
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it

angel
person Kim
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's so cute. Any chance there'll be another chapter? ^-^
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sweet and sexy story, exceelent work!