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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. . . .so much fun! Can't wait to read more!! ~a
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job! In answer to your question "Hook, line and sinker' is an american slang term that referres to fishing. It really means to be completley taken in by someones joke or misleading comment. That's what happens when us Yanks forget we aren't English ~grin~
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good start, I can't wait to find out what Professor Snape wants.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. What is Snape up to? Inquiring minds and all that. Other than a few grammatical errors your story is awesome. Keep up the good work, and update soon, soon, soon, beta'd or not, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for a new story to read. good beginning. i'm glad they were able to see eye toeye on the break up. will things be resolved with mrs weasley? waiting for more. hope you have a beta soon. p
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like this story, you are a good writer and i dont comment much on stories. I think there are one of a select few good writers here, but i cant condem just my opinion because i'm a better reader than writer myself. Keep up this story i have faith that it will be interesting.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its good so far! Wonder what Snape holds instore
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story! It has quite the feel of Hogwarts. It has a good 'hook, line, sinker' I am very curious now to see where you will go with it. Please keep updating!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, you have raw talent. However, your story would only benefit from having a beta. Find a beta and let them correct the spelling and grammatical errors; it will add polish to your story and help it shine. Good luck and keep writing!
Cheers!
Cheers!